(She storms out of his room and into the hallway. Why? ", "Can I just say that I was only out there because I was accidentally locked out." I need to hide! Lynn Sr.: KIDS, please! Summary: Taken from the episode 'No Such Luck'. "No," Lucy, the goth said, "Since you don't want us to be here, you can go up to the room and pack everything by yourselves." Rita: Lincoln?! "AND ONCE AGAIN, I HATE YOU TOO! You can never come back. (Lincoln is sitting on the back porch while his family is at the game, looking pretty mad. We wont! Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". Lincoln said, as tears started forming in his eyes. I was stupid to believe in luck and to rely on it. ", Lincoln: "Well Luna, we all make mistakes. "WELL I HATE ALL OF YOU, TOO!" Felix turned to the clock on the wall, it was almost 1 in the afternoon, why were these kids still in a room they were supposed to have been long gone from. We don't need to get violent here. We don't know what we were thinking! Scared as to what will happen if they say something wrong, eventually, Lincoln stepped forward and proceeded to say, "We're really sorry, sir. Maybe I should just stop playing softball for a while. I was being a sore loser! ], [They pant heavily, before realizing it was all a nightmare. Lynn Sr.: He wrecked our trophy case to!? And I HATE LEECHES!" Felix looked at the door and saw a number 5 on it. ", Lincoln: "Well what are we standing here for? This shocked Rita, she thought Ruth enjoyed seeing her family. Rita got up from her seat and said, "Kids, let me explain" "Explain what?!" Lincoln: I admit, it was stupid of me to drag that lie on, but while i learn an important lesson not to be a fibber more than i needed, what do you numbnuts learn!? No Such Luck / Frog Wild. This article should a part 2 episode in Season 5. Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. "I can't believe we didn't do that sooner," Lola responded back with, "She was nothing but an icky leech. Lincoln and the parents come up.]. As they leave, Jeffrey grabs Lynn Sr.'s arm, making him and his wife turn to him, he added, "And just so you know, your kids tore apart my lobby and the room you were staying in. Especially Miss. "Get every available hotel staff employee on high alert. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. He brought the talkie down to his level and said into it, "Wait. "Wait, what are you saying?" Rita tried to say something, but she couldn't. Lincoln is scared, expecting her to beat him up, but instead she wraps her arms around his neck and begins to cry), Lynn: (with a broken voice) "I'm so sorry Lincoln! Why did you kick me out of the house? No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt N literature No such luck: alternate ending 2 Add to Favourites Comment By iann28 Published: Apr 5, 2018 Favourites 0 Comments 4.9K Views *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. I only own this fanfiction story, which is rated K+, so enjoy. YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! While eating breakfast, Lincoln learns from his sisters that they have planned activities later in the day. A late St. Patrick's Day story for austin2468. Rita shouted, as she and Lynn Sr. became shocked. "Good riddance." Guess they forgot to lock the windows. Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. And with that the parents ran into the room and closed the door. Luna: I dont know. ), Lincoln: But you know what!? Even Ronnie Anne was there too. [Everyone headed to the living room to sleep together. Lola: How could he?! Lincoln blushed and hugged Ronnie Anne. Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! HATE ME FOREVER!!! We get it. You don't care about me, you think I'm nothing, but a thing, you care about no one, but yourselves, you never wanted a boy, you don't have feelings, you all feel NOTHING ANYMORE!!! (She hugs Lincoln again), Lincoln: "Thanks Lynn. She then turned around, along with the other siblings, and glared at their parents. ", Lincoln: "You know what, Lynn. Literature. Lincoln: (to the viewers) "Well, looks like everyone learned something. The school bell rings at Royal Woods Middle School. Hearing that made the parents sigh in disappointment, they should've known their kids would break things and hoped the bill wouldn't be that much, but also knew that odds were that the bill was going to be massive. "WE HATE YOUR DISGUSTING PUDDING!" Computer typing was heard yet again and, after a few moments. it is true that the Duke's actions were noble and his heart was stout, but he held doubts of his. They were both very nervous and very terrified of their kids right now. (looks at Lincoln with a smile and puts a hand on his shoulder) "All of us. She whistles for Fangs. I hate that you all are as dumb as a big fat rock! While they were still upset about their parents' behavior and getting them kicked out of an awesome hotel, they understood why they did what they did and understood that they shouldn't had forced their parents to take them on their vacation. So we've been in here trying to pass the time. Even though Lincoln was the one who brought this on himself. Lori: (sighs) Maybe we did go a little too far with these crazy superstitions. ", Lincoln: (to Lola) "Lola, all those pageants I went to, did anything bad happen those times? This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. I hate golf! "YOU KIDS ARE NOTHING BUT TROUBLE AND TO BE HONEST, I WAS GLAD WHEN YOUR PARENTS DECIDED TO TAKE YOU TO THAT HOTEL BECAUSE I COULDN'T STAND THE THOUGHT OF BEING STUCK WITH YOU MONSTERS FOR TWO DAYS!" Sell custom creations to people who love your style. Looking at her parents in shock, she said, "You got us kicked out because you decided to go skinny dipping?" # 17. the loud kamen rider by Dratinibro. Lynn: (coughs) You know, if I knew that my superstitions would make Lincoln disown us I never would have started this nonsense in the first place. They were my favourite! Lisa: (sighs in humiliation) Me neither..falling for some dumb superstition, despite always taking pride in science and not curses!! "WE HATE THOSE STUPID CATS OF YOURS!" Lincoln then explains to the viewers that with ten sisters, his schedule is always filled up, and . You're nothing, but an embarrassment to sports. No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. "YOU HEARD HER!" [In stepped David, Winston, Skippy, Silas, Paige, Francisco, Benny, Sam, Chaz, and Bobby. I hate concerts! Some blonde girl in a green dress gave us a room key and told us to enjoy our time here." (Shouts) Put the head back on before we get stung by a jellyfish! Lori yelled. Also, any negative comments or comments suggesting that I'm trying to paint the siblings in a bad light will be deleted and I will block you. "Gross and immature, if you ask me," Lola said, also glaring at her parents. ", Lincoln: "Guys, it's me!" Why are you being arrested?! Of course, it's not like the parents could them there anyway. There's a massive storm heading your way." Eventually Lincoln had the courage to say something, but was stuttering as he did so, "Areare you saying" he wanted to finished that sentence but felt that he couldn't. ", Luan: "The same goes for all of us. Meatbrain here and her dumb softball, this never would have happened! Luan: Yeah, our luck has just run out! Leni: Linky.(sniffles).please don't do this to us. Lynn Sr.: Son..we never stopped loving you..we do care about you Lori: Don't hurt us like this..we're your familywe want you to be with us. Lana: We didn't mean to ruin your life..(sniffles).we just wanted to avoid bad luck..we're so sorry we went about it all wrong Luna: We get it bro.you were never bad luck..we ruined everything for youthere is no such thing as luckwe'll never live this down.. Lola: You can't hurt your own family like this.. Lincoln: You all hurt me first! ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? "Okay," the woman says, "Surprisingly enough, it wasn't something those kids did." Okay this episode has already been hated enough you can pretty much type in the rants for 'No such luck' and there will be a lot of those, I too hated this e. Experimental One Shot. I hate it that you don't have any feelings or care anymore! Okay look, answer me these questions! "Yes, you are right," the woman said, "It appears that your parents were caught swimming in the pool after hours." Rita: Honey! Rita: Okay Lincoln! Lincoln: "Thanks, Ms. Mulligan. Lincoln: Enjoy your life in suits! Can you please just come down here? lincoln. I hate presentations! But right now, no! And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. Re-Uniting With Lincoln by KingMercury254. I'm supposed to be the most special Loud of all. I hate the fact that you never take responsibility! Everyone heads to Vanzilla, but Lincoln still stays in place). I only told Leni, Luan, Lana, Lola and Lily. Lana: (sniffles) Butthese were all our pride and joy! [The softball playoffs. "But you know what's even more lousy than that?" Lincoln: Now THAT'S bad luck for you, you brainless nitwits!! I hate boring science lectures! Everything is going wrong with the Squirrels today. No Such Luck (Alternative ending, my version) . It's too broken, even for me! I was being selfish!. Lincoln: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. THAT THING IS AS HIDEOUS AS YOU!" She playfully rolled her eyes. Am. We feel so ashamed! "But, as usual," Lincoln added, walking towards his parents, "We didn't and as a result you got angry and grounded us." (Lincoln says nothing to his mother. ENOUGH!!! We feel so ashamed!" Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! She opens it, revealing all of the siblings' love interests.] Lincoln: Happy Valentines Day, Ronnie Anne. And Lori and Lisa. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Im melting! Luan: Maybe these silly superstitions werent such a good idea. Pre-Story Notice: Hello everyone. My family learned not to let something as stupid as superstitions get to them and tear us apart, and I learned to just be honest about things like this instead of convincing them about something ridiculous just take a break from going to certain events. Lynn pitches and the opposing batter hits the ball right back her, knocking her socks, shoes, and hat off and making her spin in mid-air before landing on the ground. INT-LOUD HOUSE-LINCOLN'S ROOM (Lincoln and Lucy have just finished reading the new homemade comic that she made for him.) We messed up too. "You guys are literally going up the room right now and getting our stuff now!" ", Rita: "And tomorrow, we're going to the beach." Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. ", Mascot:[in a familiar voice] "Hey, man! My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. Ever again. The Princess and the Everlasting Emerald: A Royal Woods Fairytale. Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. Rita: You're all just angry with each other, when we get home, we'll talk about this properly. Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. I'll never be able to play games the best way again! Lola: *Gasp* My lovely car! Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. I just got so mad, that I stopped thinking and gave him a stupid idea and made us all push him away and lose almost everything. Because of this, Lincoln sneaks his way out of the kitchen, and next to the staircase. And she knew it wasn't about any massive gathering of one group for some kind of event because she would've been notified way ahead of time. Share your thoughts, experiences and the tales behind the art. That response caused an immediate reaction of confusion from the kids. In order for him to not have "bad luck", his sisters forced him to wear a squirrel suit from Lynn's baseball game. ", Lynn: (angered, she gets closer to Lincoln and raises a fist at him) "If you don't get out of here, I'm gonna-", Luna: (pull Lynn back) "WHOA! Ruth shouted at the top of her lungs. (heads to Vanzilla and gets inside, they drive of to the movies). Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." Now, let me make this clear! except in this story, the family never believed that he was bad luck in the first place. Lincoln: No! AND I'M GOING TO GET A RESTRAINING ORDER JUST TO KEEP YOU AWAY!" (They arrive home. "WELL, NOW THAT I KNOW HOW YOU KIDS FEEL ABOUT ME! Lola: What if we get stung or bitten by a shark!? ", Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myselffell for such bologna. This is a family moment. "WHENEVER WE VISIT YOU WE ARE MISERABLE!" Lynn: (clenches her fists) Say That Again.. Lincoln: No. This time, it's the infamous "No Such Luck". With that, the parents just held each other for the remainder of the night, promising to do whatever it took to earn back their children's trust. Lincoln: Which is why Im making you all wear squirrel suits for the rest of your lives, [They all gulp. You didn't deserve to win that stupid game or any game! [knocks Pep down], [Lynn finishes her run and gets picked up by her family in celebration of her victory. alternateending stpatricksday theloudhouse lincolnloud theloudhousefanfiction stpatricksday2022 Requested by austin2468. "Hotel security came up to the room?!" Lisa: That's the last time I ever fall for such phone-baloney! Luck. * "And don't even get us started on the chores she makes us do," Lincoln shouted, "Especially buffing her bunions." You love baseball. It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. I'm sorry I was such a bad loser, all I wanted was for Lincoln to support me, to support us. Theres no need to shout. Not you or Lucy. Maddie herself hid underneath the desk and she could hear the sounds of things being tossed and breaking or getting smashed on and breaking. Youve made your point! ", Lincoln: (to his parents) "What kind of parents lock their own child out? 5 months of research ruined. ", Lynn: "After how badly I treated you? There must something we could do to put a proper spotlight on our dear duke. I don't want you quit something you love because of me. "SAVE IT, RITA!" Which she did. BECAUSE I DON'T WANT YOU LITTLE DEMONS ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN!" Ruth meant what she said when she said she would get a restraining order, which she did, and to make extra sure the family couldn't go to her, she packed up everything and moved to somewhere in Alaska. After spending a good 10-15 minutes unpacking and putting everything back in the respective places in their rooms, the siblings walked into the living room and saw their parents were in fact still sitting on the couch. ", Lola:[to the mascot] "Um, do you mind, fur ball? ", Lincoln: "Oh, and I'm sorry for breaking your golf clubs, Lori. Lincoln: Lucy! Everyone awed over this.] ", Lincoln: "Because your my sister." Luna: Bro, why you so upset? ", (the sisters cheers. Luna. The siblings and parents saw Leni standing there, mom and dad were curious why Leni wasn't with them in the room but before they could say anything, Lisa answered her, "Yes my second oldest sibling. "Huh. They were wondering how could this room be these three idiots, they were booked until tomorrow. Lisa: (sighs) Obviously one that needs our cerebrums and mental spirits adjusted. Thats not how it works! ", Lincoln:[scared] "Lynn's right! You're like some mindless mob and I hate that! Lucy and I were trying to hunt a ghost." Lincoln: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Leni stared crying and the rest of them followed suit. Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. tears began to fall out their eyes. Anyway, as the title suggests, this is an alternate ending fanfic for Loud House Season 2 episode "Suite and Sour." Most of the fanfictions involve Lynn being more unlikeable, they contain Luna and Leni feeling sympathy over Lincoln because the fanbase is mostly biased between the relationships between Lincoln and Luna and Leni and the fanfictions don't even fix the episodes . After that, Rita began crying, a member of her family that she loved despite everyone else hating her had just disowned her and her family. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. We're supposed to be here until tomorrow. Luan: (tearful) We'll never be able to show our faces in public again. The siblings glared at her for a moment but saw she had a point, it didn't make sense to ground her or Lily for that matter, she was a baby, anything she did wasn't entirely her fault. They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. The worst part is, they had no argument against this. Clenching his fist, he raises it up and smashes it hard on the ground. I can't let those crazy beasts see me! The Loud House: No Such Luck (2 Alternate Endings) View source Ah yes, No Such Luck. Lana: What did you expect us to do Lincoln? Lincoln: That's what i always say. Everyone finally realized that what they've done. ], Baseball Announcer: "It's goingit's goingIT'S GONE!!! Lynn: (sighs) Who am I kidding? I ADMIT IT!!! Knowing they sealed the deal and there's no way they will ever have to go back to Aunt Ruth's, Lincoln said, "Well so long, freakshow. Luan: (with a broken voice) "We treated you like an outcast because we were stupid enough to believe that junk! I'm not. YOU ARE NOT BAD LUCK!!! "What's wrong with Aunt Ruth?" (Inhales, then exhales) "I. "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. This triggered events that none of the Loud House family could have seen. He then grabs one of the sofa cushions and screams all his frustration into it.). SQUIRRELS WIN! Project Loud House; Ties That Bind; It's a Loud, Loud, Loud, Loud, House; Toads and Tiaras; . WE MAKE EVERYTHING WORSE!!! My own family, locking me out. DeviantArt Protect. I MESSED UP!!! Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." ", Baseball Announcer: "Just look at our poor squirrels! But right now, ive had it! They messed up and their children were furious with them because of it. Plot. Morag: is it now? If he losses, he doesn't blame me or my other friends. Lincoln: "Coming!" Lincoln yelled, "WE HATE YOU!" Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. I heard you scream! loud. The family and Bobby are there to support Lynn. ", Lincoln: "No. He even throws many of his family's items out the windows, such as Luna's guitar, Luan's comedy props, Lisa's science set, Lori's phone, Leni's sewing machine and dresses, Rita's typing machine, Lynn Sr's cowbell, Lana's animal shelters, Lola's cosmetics and tiaras, Lucy's poetry book and coffin, the TV and most of Lynn's sports equipment.

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